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LeeAnn Pickrell's avatar

Oh, I love this! I can taste the chocolate, which gives me a lot of pleasure.

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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

I'm not sure I fathom the self control needed to eat only one piece of chocolate a day, but this poem almost makes me want to do so. The precision and delicacy of the line breaks feels like a perfect form that echoes the speaker's deliberate and patient savoring of the ritual of the chocolate. What a delight.

I especially like:

"protected by peas

and edamame"

and

"the cooled

jeweled box."

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